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Carmela Ken is the youngest among the Ken twins. She is loved by all and provided with all she wants which is all a girl could dream of. But sometimes kindness isn't really kindness as there could be more beneath the eyes. Carmela is well aware of her dark family history but she sees looking into it as a waste of time as everything was just as she wanted PERFECT while her family trie's their best to protect her from her own self unknown to her Her perfect world comes crashing down the day she decided to take her sisters place on the alter thinking she was doing the right thing unknown to her that faith had different plans. After moving in with her new husband she faces a lot of difficulties that could make one give up on living but she never backed down as she wanted to see the marriage through even if it wasn't one of fairy tale. she sometimes woke up with her body being drained with a jug of water while other times by a ugly looking monster straddling her while she makes a run for her life. She so badly wanted to know who she was, what her destiny had install for her and why her life was in a perfect mess that she ended up walking right into the devil's trap. will she be able to survive and stay alive for the remaining days of her life while being married to a demon like Zamiel Dean? stay tuned.

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12mth
Grandmasters Grandmasters
The story is up to my liking. Though the writing itself is in shackles of typos and the writing style is in not so good state. Though it doesn't hindered me to read it! Loved it a lot. [img=faceslap]
12mth
alu_sachi alu_sachi
[{"type":1,"text":"this is such a good book that I can't help but read it to the end. the writing quality is a little bit lucklustor not to mention the story development and characters designing. Everything is just flowing.✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️"},{"type":2,"text":"https://media.tenor.com/NnpkTGoGoWgAAAAM/shocked-reading.gif","height":124,"width":220}]
1yr
Chase_Xavier_123 Chase_Xavier_123
It has good plot and potential. Writing Quality - It good I didn't see any grammatical errors but one thing that bugged me was the pov changes in single chapter I have read my shares of novels in different pov but they at very least have one consistent like that of MC's. It's my own preference though. Story Development - The story is kinda fast paced you just can't miss the details. The twins names can confuse a little. But all in all it have great plot line. I will also prefer the chapter to be a little longer. Character Design - Really loved the twins but sorry I can't still bring myself to hate her sister. Rather I hate ML he is the reason for the drift or misunderstanding that might start between the twins in future Hate that happening 😞. Updating stability - You are doing good don't be pressured. Quality over quantity. World background - Normal modern rich family but grandpa kinda sus though.
here story begins

Chapter 1: introduction

~~ CARMELA'S POV ~~

" Cal I can't do this, I can't get married to Zamiel he would make my life a living hell if I don't follow his rules and you know I have a habit of breaking rules please help me " Carlene cried

I felt bad seeing my sister like this but I didn't know what to do

" But Carlene you've been called to come down to the altar it's already too late

Why didn't you tell mum and dad you didn't want to marry him ? " I asked hugging her

" I ... I did something which I can't tell you about and we both had an agreement that if I am his wife for the next three hundred and sixty-five days he won't let it out " she cried more ruining her makeup

" Just 365 days? " I asked and she nodded

" Okay listen to me very clearly I want us to switch places

I'll be his bride since I can endure more and you'll pretend to be me " I said and she began crying again

" I'm so sorry Cal i'm such a bad twin all I do is ruin your life " she hugged me

" It's okay, I have to go get ready"

I entered the bathroom and quickly changed into Carlene's wedding gown

we both arrived at the altar and I exchanged vows with Zamiel

he was asked to kiss me and after that, we proceeded to the reception

" Take very good care of yourself okay," mum said and hugged me

" And don't forget to call us every day" dad added and pecked me

I didn't dare remove my veil cause is I did mum and dad would recognize me

" Carlene why are you so quiet? " Mum asked and I shook my head

I turned to leave but she drew my veil

I didn't bother to turn around I just sat in the car slamming the door

" Here your parents asked me to give it to you " Zamiel handed me my veil as he sat in the car.

The driver drove off and there was dead silence in the car as we drove to Zamiel's house

And I felt very nervous and scared at the same time

" Stop " Zamiel suddenly said and the car came to a halt

" Driver privacy " he instructed and the driver stepped out slamming the door

I felt like telling him not to leave me alone with this monster but the words were stuck in my throat

" Why did you marry me instead of your sister?" he asked in a scary tone

I just wished that the ground could just open and swallow me

except for mum, dad and grandma no one was able to tell the difference between me and Carlene so how did he know that am not Carlene but Carmela

I felt like disappearing but I couldn't use my powers as my mum have locked them

" I said where is your sister?" He screamed and I suddenly broke into tears

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