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The Dysfunctional World

The Dysfunctional World

Devesh_Goyalji

Realistic Fiction

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Synopsis

[It is a fresh and completely unexplored story]
[I warn the readers that if you read the story, than you risk your heart being crushed with pain.]

Heena's mother was a widow who was cast aside by the society. As Heena grew up she had to deal with everything like her mother but one day an unknown guest arrives at their doorstep. Suddenly their life takes a big turn. Who is this person, why and how did he change Heena's life forever. Is it for good or bad?

“There is a lot going on, and it is a rather suspenseful story, so I would prefer it if you read it.”

Also, leave your valuable suggestions for me to improve.
Thanks for your time.

[New Chapters added every Monday 12:00 PM]

[This novel will have I only a few chapters and no, I shall not drop it anyhow, even if I am dying I shall complete this novel. After all this novel is just the setting or prelude for the actual story to begin with.]

[It is a weekly release, so things will take time to progress, so be patient. By the time i shall also develop my skills and bring out the best in what is to come.]

[I completely own the cover image but still if you want you can download it from my deviant profile :
https://www.deviantart.com/bonygo/]

This novel is also available to read on Tapas with a lot more illustrations so the readers can also opt to read it.

For Business contact me at : Deveshgoyalg@gmail.com

Top Reviews

devesg

devesg

1yr
I am waiting for the next chapter eagerly. I presume the write is a newbie but still the story is good.
Devesh_Goyalji

Devesh_Goyalji

1yr
Its not good to rate your book but I believe the story absolutely is worth the rating but my way of writing may not be. I am new in writing business and am trying to learn as I write. I hope you like it or if you don't than don't just go. leave a 1 star review but do leave one.
Ink_Quanta

Ink_Quanta

1yr
It seems nice all over but the paragraphs should have some space b/w them I guess...or else it will be pretty much boring....but it seems very nice the way everything is deeply described...and kinda contains a message...so nice one!

Chapter 1: Life of Shilpi

Heena was anxious. She woke up late today so now she had very less time to approach the well and fill the utensils before the ladies from the big houses show up. "Don't worry too much, we have enough water for the both of us to survive today", said Heena's mother Shilpi.

Shilpi was a short women with pale skin and black hair. Her facial bone structure was immaculate but her skin was saggy due to malnourishment. She didn't have the strength to bring herself on her two feet much rather help Heena. Shilpi's husband died in an accident when Heena was just a newly born child. Shilpi held herself and brought up the child as an alone mother. Although Shilpi's family was a lower caste whom they wouldn't even like to see but because Shilpi was still in her youth and a rather beautiful lady, the upper-class man offered to help her with finances in exchange for sexual benefits. But Shilpi valued her sanctity more than anything else. If not for that, any women might have given into the offers as what Shilpi dealt with was not just mere physical hardship but also mental humiliation. Although Shilpi never accepted any offer of help the villagemen didn't believe that was the case. They refused to accept the fact that Shilpi was able to raise her child without any help. Therefore Shilpi was exiled from the village and was forced to live in the outskirts for the committing adultery and reasoning that it is putting bad influence on the village youth.

Shilpi was barred from using the only source of clean water in the village in the presence of any villagemen, she was forbidden from entering the temple and threatened to be stoned to death if seen by the villagers. Shilpi's cottage wasn't even relocated as she was casted away so she had to live in an old abandoned shack made of straw and bamboo.

Even her husband's kin refused to take her in or help her relocate as she was considered a cursed women.

Shilpi endured everything that was thrown at her. She never complained to anyone about the injustice she was facing, neither did she ever ask anyone for help. She would rather die than ask anyone unwilling for help. It wasn't just her self-esteem that stopped her, Shilpi didn't want to sully her husband's name and respect.

Shilpi's laboured all day just to get enough money to feed her daughter and maybe get some for herself. As Heena grew up, she started helping her mother out. Heena was a patient child and somehow she had so much more matured mentality than many elders. In looks she paled in comparison to her mother but still as compared to most girls she could be considered a rare beauty. Her skin had a light brown tone and she had dark black hair. Her eyes similar to her mother were dark brown in colour. She had a lean figure and her bones were better nourished than her mother's. Her facial structure was however almost identical to her mother.

Heena never acted stubborn or obstinate with her mother. Whenever Heena saw other children in the village playing with toys she used to completely ignored them. Although Heena never said it or asked for, Shilpi understood that she too wanted some toys but couldn't ask for her mother to buy one since she knew what Shilpi was going through. They could barely eat a two course meal but still Shilpi didn't want her child to suffer and grow up with only bad memories.

One day Shilpi kept up all night and sewed a ragdoll out of a straw pillow that she used to sleep. The next day Shilpi went out for work after lunch and told Heena to keep watch of the house. Shilpi also instructed Heena to not cook food for the night as she would do it herself. Shilpi returned in the evening with some stuff that she hid in her bag. She immediately told Heena to move out and not return until she calls for her. Heena was confused, but still she moved out and waited for her call. Half an hour later, Shilpi called for Heena in a loud but elegant voice, "Heena, come in." Heena replied with an affirmative and went inside.

As soon as Heena entered Shilpi embraced her tightly, "Happy Birthday, my little moonlight." Heena didn't know it was her twelfth birthday. Her joy knew no bounds but the only reaction that could come out of her was tears. Heena cried hard as she reciprocated her mother's hug. Shilpi than presented Heena with what she had made last night. "A doll! its so beautiful. Did you make it?", Heena asked in a joyful tone. Shilpi nodded with the satisfaction that her daughter's happiness gave her.

Following the eventful exchange of love and hugs, the duo sat down as for the first time they were going to have vegetables for dinner. This was the most beautiful night Heena ever had till now.

The night lasted a decade for them as Heena grew up into a youthful yet graceful women.