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[Reviewed on: 07-09-2022] [Reading status: Chapter 2] [Reviewed by: Aysel Inara] -*-*-*-*- REMARKS: - First of all, let me praise the imagery and the flow. Kudos to that part, it was the strongest of all. - Loved how the earthquake and the prior scenes were told. - I personally had a hard time pronouncing Inoyva, haha. But hey, it was an interesting name. - I assume it would be a mix of isekai and apocalyptic theme. However, eager to see the MC getting stronger. - I am pretty sure the title of the book indicates the 'progress' of the mc. However, I literally had to google the word incipience. I don't think it's a common synonym, or maybe I am totally noob. But I suggest to change the title into more direct one because I'm sure you don't want to waste the potential of book or to make readers use google to first know the title. Or worst case skip the book altogether. - Cover also needs a change, it's bland. Maybe a character would be fine.

Hi there! Me Kimmy Yamashira, author of Crystal Pair (English Version). Okay I here to review your book. So I lobe with this concept, idea, and plot if very cool. There two monster that streght ability, that I like to follow their war. And ... maybe I just ask : where you find the name of that monsters? Because thats so unique I think. Are you made itself or there from history of another place? And fyi, keep going! You novel very good [img=recommend]

As this is my first attempt at writing a webnovel, please forgive me for any mishaps in spellings and errors, though I might illiterate that there's a tad minor errors.