Its good beginning. Nice emotional portrayal in the early chapters. We know the MC wants revenge, but for now it's still unknown how she gets her revenge. Except using laxatives (That's bad). The power that the MC gets is also not known how it will be used later. There is a lot of potential to look forward to. It's a nice good story, with sentences that flow and is easy to read. It's just that there are some paragraphs that are a bit long, no problem, it's just a little tired in the eyes.