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Nice Nice Nice Nice! I love it! Since I love this kind of story, I just fall for it! I will add it to my library and sure want a lots of chapters! Please dear author keep updating! I am hungry for your blood! Sorry, I am not a zombie like them but I truly want more chapters to read!

A decent story but with potential.
the plot was good but the writing wasn't. The pacing was all over the place and I know I'm just nitpicking but maybe proofreading could help. 
Not a fan of the narrative, it jumps a lot.
Some things felt disjointed and perhaps all of this could be simply solved with an edit. hopefully the author won't give up on this story and continue.