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Trying to Survive Inside This Forsaken World

Trying to Survive Inside This Forsaken World

Jewels_the_weeb

Fantasy

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Synopsis

"I caused... So much pain..."
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Two weeks ago, a life changing incident occurred. Seven students specifically were affected the most. A loss of a friend, a comrade, a leader. They're small team was broken, and could never be the same again.

Now, they each must tackle their feelings towards a certain girl, who had no control over that night. And yet had the power to turn their lives upside down forever.


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Top Reviews

captiun

captiun

Status: c3 2yr
It's good! Especially the character design and the world background. You're in for a beautifully imagined fantasy world, told through the eyes of a young lady in great detail. Maybe you'll consider the pace slow, but it's 100% needed. It serves to build a world that is much different from ours. It's a good read and I actually like the characters. The author has a great imagination, doubt. Her universe differs significantly from classic fantasy, and yet, everything fits.
Akira_Monadelle

Akira_Monadelle

Status: c2 1yr
The chapters are short but they are beautifully structured and wonderfully written. There are little to no grammatical errors making this novel a very very easy and understandable read.

As the story progressed I couldn't help but keep reading. The author paid keen attention to character development and certainly kept me intrigued. A lovely lovely novel 🤗
US_DreamerDon

US_DreamerDon

Status: c2 2yr
I'm impressed on the updating of the story so far!  There are a lot of great points in the writing starting from Chapter 1.   I do like how the author separates between the 1st POV and 3rd POV.  And the reader isn't jarred because of it.  

I do have a nick pick though-  When fleeing for one's life, the body enters a fight or flight mode.  These modes are full of adrenaline and your heart will be thumping really fast, but light pain will seem to disappear.  It all comes flooding back once you come down from the adrenaline.

I do highly recommend this story and I wish the author good luck with the updates!