I'm really sorry to say that I had to remove my work for some reason and I already published it again. So if you want to read it, please search the sane name and you'll find it☺️ I did many mistakes in my story and now I'm trying to revise it and reduced the mistakes as much as possible. Love you guys...stay healthy and happy and keep supporting me❤️❤️ ****************************************Kim Dae Ju, a famous idol whom is in the highest peak of his career, suddenly have an accident that greatly changed his life. After he opened his eyes, he realized that he has to lead a very normal life... in a strangers body! Shocked and scared of the sudden mystery of his body swapping with a person he never met nor saw before; the great determination of unraveling the mystery fueled him to stay in his unwanted host. Will he able to retrieve his life back? Or will he be trapped forever because of the love he feels for host's beautiful wife. Though he knew that they were not destined to be together. Suddenly he discovered a fully new things about the body. It was actually a dead body. What will he do for get his body back? What will happen to the girl whom he loved? And what will happen to the body? ************************************
The first chapter was very dialogue-heavy and I am confused who was talking. Haha 😂 lol but anyways. How about introducing your characters after he has a dialogue or part in the dialogue. Like said Min Ji. A friend of our protagonist who was an ex of his best friend. I know you will introduce them later on. One by one but it was just a suggestion from a reader to the author. You are the author so you have the power to turn the tides if you want. Now to the review, Nice relatable characters and not dull. Good execution of dialogues by the way..haha. The story progression was nice and steady. So far so good! 👍 Kudos and good luck! 😉
Great plot idea,Author! 😍 I love body swap stories and novels! Definitely going to see how your novel goes. 😊😊 You have a great synopsis, but it will need a little editing to grab more attention. You need to inform your readers that it's about a body swap even though you have the tag. 🙂🙂 Add more words that shows feelings in your story and you'll be greater!
Hey author! I hope everything is going great for you. ✨I read your book and by far it’s one of the greatest works I’ve read here on Webnovel. I loved all the complexity in your characters and the way you set up your scenes. I think you are an amazing writer. 😍 You have such a way with words, and I love your writing style. Literally cannot wait to read more! If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! This message turned out longer than I thought, but have a wonderful day!!!❤️❤️❤️