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“You were meant to be the king of adventure and it has been destined since you were born.” An old legend appears to be true when a mighty storm hit Derek's peaceful world and to save his kingdom he sets out on an adventure and along the way he’s helped by friends and allies who helped him get through the obstacles .watch Derek go on the greatest adventure of his time that changed his world. P.S I don't own the cover .... 愛
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Constantine6
3yr
ayen_zone
Status: c1
3yr
Great job with your first novel here, Author! [img=recommend][img=recommend] The legend in your novel is sooo good, and how you brought up the villain in the next chapters... I can see that you're pretty good at writing action scenes. 😁😁 I felt rushed in the first few chapters though, you can make it longer by adding up more exciting scenes than just telling the story. Your novel have a great idea, your chapters are written well too, just some minor errors like punctuations, but in general it's good! 😊🙂👍🏻 Your novel will stay in my collection, so keep writing! 😊😁
kuhaku_sora
Status: c3
3yr
Goood concept, lots of scenes, and I cannot wait for the character development of the story as well as the story line! The only thing that I want to point out are the tenses (past and present tense), dialogue tags, and as well as some intricate texts found on the novel. After editting those, this novel will become much better in no time!! ^^