Webnovel

The idea is pretty neat, a little hiccups on some sentences and words but it is a good novel if done right, uploading seems to be good, I know how hard writing is so good job for a first novel if I'm correct that this is not your first.

This novel is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! The plot itself was unique and was very engaging to read. I am very well pleased with the writing of the author. 
Good luck and may your novel be blessed with more readers.

its a nice concept, the author is going in the right direction so far and i am not feeling sleepy while reading this novel so far hahhahahah