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ON HIATUS Son: Mama at the age of 15 I will finally be a man and from then, I will take some iron horses together with capable solders to adventure. I alone as a sword saint, I will conquer the forest until I reach Green Marble. Mother: Am sure you will little love, but to achieve that you need to be diligent and study everything regarding geography, Weather, flora, fauna including little of astronomy and astrology. Son: That I will try, but mama if you say everything, that close to impossible, because I can't see the end of the Animal section of the library. Mother: That is a sign of given up Son: Don't worry, I will do it!! .................................................................................. The continent of DEEP as others call it, is a Mysterious continent that hold many secrets. Even the most powerful Kingdom in the continent that excels at History and discovery of the Ancient Civilization only found the tip of the iceberg. Even the must powerful warrior that utilize a Divine power will waver at some location, turn tail and ran with pride on his face that he take a glimpse at something. ................................................................................. Hello there, New Author is here. This is my first Novel. I hope to write something good, but you know I am new to this, so don't judge. Practice makes perfect
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The_Celestial_King
Shameless Author Review I love My Novel to the point I'm bias, so I give it five stars. I am a new Author and this is my very first Novel. Cons English is not even my second language, so you should expect Grammar problems and spelling mistakes. Pls be patient I will improve gradually. Please provide your corrections, suggestions and insights in the comment section of every chapter. It will be helpful and good motivator. Productive critics are probative while abusive critic are unapproved If you like My Novel pls Like, Review, and give Power stone. Especially Power stone Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote THANK YOU
Mary_Algen_Guiang1
I read the author's note before proceeding to read the synopsis and the first chapters. I can say beyond doubt that the story is really captivating! and there were no traces of grammatical errors that the readers have been warned about. English is also not my second language so I can relate to the author's insecurity, but after reading the chapters, I can say that the author's fears have no basis at all. the book is a wonderful, beautiful piece of art and deserves this perfect 5 stars. I am also gifting the story as a piece of lucky charm from one author to another. best of luck in everything you write author-san!
Chapter 1: A Day Before Life Changing Destiny
A fifteen-year-old boy stands at 1.85 m tall. Gazing at a little garden. He has an arrogant vibe and Stoic expression. His eyes gleam with intelligence.
The wind breeze, blow his long luxurious garment. The air is filled with the sweet smell of different flowers.
His thoughts are straight and full of confidence. But deep within, he knew achieving his goals are close to impossible.
Because the road is full of competition and unimaginable amount of danger.
But that is the only way. A path in which to be different.
In this society where a commoner has something to show, let alone a Noble.
A Society of Abilities and Infinite Possibilities!
Sigh!!!
A smile appears on his handsome face. A thought flashed in his mind about what his mother told him a year ago "Little love do not overdo yourself. Take your time to ponder things before you act. Choose diligently not blindly."
This thought makes him hesitate about his decision. 'Well if I can do it, then, I will do it."
He turns his head toward his right side. He ponders while gazing at his brothers and sisters that number up to Seventeen. Is it a most that a person of his caliber to have many children??
'It doesn't, 't matter, since He doesn't, 't play any favorites. Besides, if you are a child of the three wives, that enough. One will have a special standing among the siblings'!
"SHABBAR, come over here and tell us if You have any enlightenment "
Shabbar's gaze focuses on the person that yells his name.
"Thou shall do what thy self feel safe" answered shabbar.
A laugh echoed from the siblings. Murmuring follows after. Shabbar himself laugh a little. What he did is mimic one of their strict language teachers.
Shabbar walks towards the group. Smiling while saying, "Father's desire might suit us, but the truth is that we shall choose from our best capabilities... Black mamba, what path will you take?"
The person's name black mamba. Look at Shabbar with a bit of angry gaze. Replying, "Although I don't like that nickname. But I think, I will do with it. I already have a suitable path. I going for Creation and Life specifically Snakes." There is a grin on his face, that ooze confidence as if he saw his future self at the pinnacle of all.
'He earns his confidence, if you relate, it to his Mother." Thought Shabbar.
A soft melodic voice sounded from the innermost part of the garden. Saying" I think we should all try to do what Father asks us. If we couldn't, then a new path is always open"
"We need to risk our lives before we took appropriate steps" an Angry voice from one of the persons.
"Amanda please don, 't instill your ideals on us.'' Another person interjected.
''Obeying Father is imperative in certain matters, but in this matter, we get to choose.'' Another added.
''Among us, there are those who already have their specialty. For those who wish for the long road. Good Luck." Black mamba concluded.
Amanda walks out of the garden. With steady steps. Smiling and saying " Am not discouraging anyone. But only a suggestion I give. I hope for everyone's success."
While they were discussing a thunderous sound quake in the air, a flash of light pass in the sky drowning the sunlight, disappearing as fast as it comes.
The children there age is between 13 to 24, has a complicated expression. Their mind carrying different thoughts.
"Hahahhah let go. Since He is back!!!. We all know it is a luxury meeting him. We might as well take his lectures as a way of good interaction " The eldest says while prompting others to follow.