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Hmm, I honestly don't know what to say. You express your characters well enough for us readers to understand what are they feeling, what are they thinking and how they view things from their own perspective. So I guess that's a plus. Most authors don't pay much attention to that, although portraying the characters' emotions is the most important aspect of all. And that's your asset. Great job authors!

Dude this story is GREAT!  You drew a reader right in with that awesome plot of yours! I gotta admit, i really adore the main character and am really curious about what will happen in the future! Your story is with potential! Love it!

Eek~ this is really good 

Its sooooo raww bro....and i realllyyyy luv roSieeee shes so cuteeee and SHe keeps her self togetha even though yhings be goin down 


Ouuuu an i know***w leo is just a finneee sPecimen. *chefs kiss*

Thats all i gotta say,
Keep it up authors cant wait to read more