I told Santa I want you for Christmas

Ce_reene

Fantasy

Synopsis

As she sat in the window of her cabin in the Villa Las Estrellas, while looking outside, she couldn't help but think about "him". Cold air seeped in through the shattered window with a moan.She was freezing but didn't bother to start the fire in the cabin. Her eyes were swollen and there were dark circles under them, which indicated her sleeplessness. 
"That was not a dream. It was real... So real. He was real. He is real....He is.....He is."
A sudden chilliness descended around her, making her shiver due to the coldness and fear. She looked around her without blinking, stood up from her place and checked every corner of the cabin. She was so desperate to find "him". Where was he though? Like a mad woman she fisted her hair and screamed.
She kept screaming for few minutes then opened her bag and took out a red lipstick from it. Then she decisively walked towards the mirror hanged on one side of the wall of cabin and uncapped the lipstick. 
With the red lipstick she wrote on the mirror:
“Just, warning you!!! If a fat man puts you in a bag on Christmas Eve… don’t worry, I told Santa I wanted you for Christmas”
She smiled brilliantly at her reflection in the mirror as hot tears rolled down her cheeks while she recalled what happened last Christmas.

Top Reviews

CodeW

Status: c2 4yr

As of now, the Webnovel only has two chapters... which is too little to judge. 
But, so far, I find the premise a bit funny. "Wanting Santa..." ha ha. 
This can be a hit on the romance section in Webnovel. Keep writing, and don't give up.

Sphynx_99

Status: c2 4yr

Honestly, I think this is a diamond in the rough. There were a few mistakes, but it can be easily fixed with some proofreading. This reminds me somehow of the story of Anastasia. The Russian princess (I guess??) who disappeared. So far so good. I wish there were more chapters. Keep up the good work!

Chapter 1: Synopsis

As she sat in the window of her cabin in the Villa Las Estrellas, while looking outside, she couldn't help but think about "him". Cold air seeped in through the shattered window with a moan.She was freezing but didn't bother to start the fire in the cabin. Her eyes were swollen and there were dark circles under them, which indicated her sleeplessness.

"That was not a dream. It was real... So real. He was real. He is real....He is.....He is."

She mumbled.

A sudden chilliness descended around her, making her shiver due to the coldness and fear. She looked around her without blinking, as if trying to feel his presence. She stood up from her place and checked every corner of the cabin.

She was so desperate to find "him".

Where was he though? Like a mad woman she fisted her hair and screamed.

She kept screaming for few minutes. She took out a red lipstick from her pants pocket and decisively walked towards the mirror hanging on one side of the wall of cabin and uncapped the lipstick.

With the lipstick she wrote on the mirror this message in red bold letters:

"Just, warning you!!! If a fat man puts you in a bag on Christmas Eve… don't worry, I told Santa I wanted you for Christmas"

She smiled brilliantly at her reflection in the mirror as hot tears rolled down her cheeks while she recalled what happened last Christmas.

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