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I was drawn by the plot of this tory. Mystery and romance mixed together creating an intriguing tale between a grim reaper and a hybrid. This setting is not your cliche trope. Although it was still early to see the progress but just from the early chapters, I can see the potential hidden within.
keep writing. 

The story is really nice! I like that there's a good balance between dialogue and description ( yes, I am a big fan of descriptions). You are able to give us insight both into the mind of the characters, but also into the world background, so it feels easier to introduce yourself into the story. Keep it up!

The story was still on its early stage and it has more room to grow! With the current talent of the Author, her writings will become more awesome! The narration was easy to read and the flow of the sentences didn't stutter a bit. Good luck author and congrats on your novel. The future is bright ahead so I wish you best of luck!