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debbieintrigue
The synopsis was intended that way, it's more tormenting to a curious mind, when the story unravels in ways you least expect, i believe this particular story is one that should be experienced and not summed up into a few words, embrace the mystery that lies in wat, with only the name as you go on a rid, on a thrilling journey with SINFUL THIRST, hope you have a great time reading.😘 au revoir. ,
Tanya_Winters
A sassy protagonist! The story is set in a historical period where there are still nobles and the main character is the daughter of a wealthy noble. What stood out to me the most is the narrative style. The protagonist talks in a sassy tone and addresses the reader directly which made the reading experience quite delightful. There are some small grammatical mistakes: the "I" pronoun in lowercase which needs to be in uppercase, spelling should be "etiquette", and run-on sentences that can be made into shorter sentences. Just fix it a bit and the story will be flawless. The story is easy to follow and the narrative of the sassy protagonist is really interesting. This story has great potential. Nice work, author! 😊
IrisSky
To be honest, I was a bit skeptical about it when I decided to read the book. The synopsis could be written better to give a clear understanding to readers what they are in for. This being said, the book itself is quite interesting. The sentences are free flowing and make your imagination run wide. Your writing style is the one which I liked the most, and sometimes I can relate to the main character. I am waiting for more!!!!
Chapter 1: 1
There was no negotiation after I entered into a deal with the devil, no going back, but I already knew that from the very beginning.
Before we go any further, let me just make it clear that whatever I did, I didn't do under pressure, I wasn't forced, or lured, or manipulated like you may be thinking, so remember this before you start feeling sorry for me, because I really don't need it.
The world is a constant reminder of just how frail and insignificant everything really is, we are born, we live and we die, and that's it, everything vanishes, our so called lives comes to an end, and we are forgotten.
Those who are left alive continue living, and those who die, remain dead, that was the natural order, the order we were born into, the order we were made to believe.
I also believed that order, I never questioned it, I only accepted it. Now don't expect me to tell you a story of how I lived a sorry excuse of a life, or had to work tirelessly before I could feed, or maybe a sob story of falling in love and giving my life for the one I loved, its not going to happen.
After all, love is overrated, it has always been, I was actually born with what most would call one heck of a golden spoon, my greatgrandfather was one of the richest men in his time, and so was his father, and his father before that, and now it was down to my father, anyway, we were anything but poor, luxury and wealth was more or less a play thing for me, I had everything I could ever ask for and more.
And no, I wasn't the only child, my father, even though he was a highly respected man was not so prudent when it came to his affairs, and I don't mean affairs of state, he was as promiscuous as a loose fox, and not long after, his whores soon became his mistresses, some he made wives, others he left as concubines.
Try to pay attention, and don't bother your mind with trying to find a cliché in my story, I can almost assure you that you won't find any.
Beatrice was my mother's maiden name, but after getting married to my father she became the Lady Beatrice, what were you expecting ? A different name perhaps, get used to me, because this is how I will tell you everything, if you don't like my methods then you can stop reading, and forget you ever saw anything, but then you wouldn't know what happened to make me such a glum of a person, sorry, I keep forgetting, I stopped being a person a long time ago, now I'm just a....
You'll have to turn the page to find out ....
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