Like I commented within... Your book needs more attention and for that, I would recommend it on my Facebook profile. I didn't completely read it which I will soon but it was indeed a story to tell. And like I saw on a review from one of your readers, the girl seems so innocent to do crazy... you know what I mean! LOL
But I love and love... love it!! Just keep writing we're right there to support.[img=coins]
4yr
firstraindrop
firstraindrop
Wow. Nuwa's dream told so many things about her. She is one strong girl who respect her parents and their belifes. A half vampire have so much of love inside her heart that she is ready to live alone for her infinity life but doesn't want a single soul to die because of her....Hatts off to her.
For her what her mother asked her is more important than anything else. Her parents asked her not to drink blood so she fought with her grandfather for it. Her mother believed in God so nuwa also believed in God.
When she felt sad in graveyard I felt her emotions so much. She miss them so much but stands strong and author you just nailed it. Other so called strong girl need others to help her but nuwa is truly MC...I loved it author. I loved it. 😍😍😍😍❤❤❤ keep updating please. ..❤❤❤
4yr
Kirbyisgreen
Kirbyisgreen
Good beginning, interesting story idea. Keep going author,
A few ideas for you,
It was a bit jarring reading that an innocent girl suddenly falls in love with a strange man and had ***? I see that it is R-18 but perhaps you can set the scene that Nuwa is not very innocent after all and likes to be naughty?
Just an idea, up to you. :)