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I really love the way you wrote the birth of mc. Like, it was smooth like butter. Good novel, keep up the good work.                          

This story has shown great potential, and it might become more popular if the author continues writing with the same quality they have so far. There are very few grammatical mistakes that I've noticed but they do not get in the way of a enjoyable experience, and the plot moves at a nice enjoyable pace. Overall I'd say that the characters have yet to show more of themselves and their personalities, but I believe the author will adress that in future chapters. This story is pretty enjoyable to read and I recommend it to anyone looking for the reborn/system troupe (BL included).

The story is very interesting  Your writing style is awesome. This story has a lot of potential and I'm really looking forward to more. Keep up the good work author!!!