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Four boys that were being locked from their past met their destined partners, who will not only disturb their life but also the choices that they made. The choices that was their main intention, their driving force to live, their obsession. An obsession that they held and believe for all of their life, for them to stay sane. But what happened if in the middle of their path, someone will appear, hindering them to their own goal. Will they choose their goal that was full of blood and madness? Or the girl that they fall in love in the midst of their goal? -------- The four boys who were in the middle of their choices, finally decided something as they looked at the star above their head, before saying something that will change their lives forever, "...this is My Choice" Follow me to find what they will choose in the end.
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GloriouslyFamous
Status: c1
4yr
NotUse
Status: c2
4yr
I won't mind story development for now since there is basically a single chapter when I wrote this review. So, the Onomatopoeia in this novel is great. Some dialogues are capitalized and I understand it is for the sake of emphasis and exaggeration but for others it might seem too much. You only need three exclamation points and not a dozen but I'm fine with it having many but for other readers it may not. That is the only thing I have to criticize about. Ok, the first chapter the characters were introduced. I was able to picture them in a few paragraphs just by the way the author describes them and by how they speak. As for grammar, I'll keep things even. I am not a grammar specialist so I do not have the right to judge the grammar of this book. Keep up the good work and keep on writing! Good luck