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"What happened to the wolf? Was it a wolf? It has red eyes, I ---- " I stopped abruptly and looked at him "How did you shoved it like that?" "Adrenaline, I guess" he answered. But his eyes were not looking at me when he said that. "That can be but I think you're lying" I said. Some weird things have happened today, one, this guy showed up and showed me his interest, two, a woman he knows, obviously came to us saying I have to be careful from him and three, a freaking real wolf just attacked me. He was silent for a bit. "You are my mate, Alesha." Here he goes again with that. "What mate? Like vampires and werewolves?" I asked in a sarcastic way but he did not laughed. "Not vampires" he said. I looked at him and tried to find emotion to betray his words, some kind of emotion to show he's just kidding with me. But there are none. "Werewolf" he continued, "The one who attacked you is a werewolf." "In broad daylight? Aren't they suppose to turn during a full moon?" I just went along with what he is saying. "Alesha, we are real" he said. --- an excerpt of this story Esha just wanted to live peacefully and get over senior high or high school life but this changes gradually when things started to unravel from her past. ************************ Author's request ≧∇≦ Feedback are much appreciated, thank you in advance. Feel free to comment, review, rate and vote ^_^
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NotUse
I'll do my review honestly as possible like what I do in most review swaps. Writing Quality is great. The plot is interesting even if it is the common werewolf plot. The paragraphs are attention-grabbing, it really hooks me to the point I did not realize I finished all eight chapters so far. I'm not good at grammar too, so I can't just randomly judge the grammar of yours. Character interaction is wonderful, especially the "small talk of love" chapter. Overall, I will be giving your novel five stars!
minho_Shiny
The start was very interesting and I liked the way how author did make the whole story intriguing. I already added the story in my library and definitely gonna continue reading it. Author did a great job in description part. The story development is also well in pace. All in all author did a good job and keep up the good work dear author. I will definitely give 5/5 for the authors hardwork and to encourage the author to deliver such more good works. I'm cheering for you author
Mandeep_Singh_780
Great starting for the story. I didn't found any mistakes. I like in start that the story tries and make you fear of the unknown. It can still be imporved and I can say that you are on the right path. Just waiting for some action. I also liked the changing perspectives. The only problum I faced was the character name I am so bad at remembring the names😅 But overall the novel is great. I will continue to read and will update the review. Keep up I support you.
Chapter 1: Apology Chapter --- author
I will try to add more chapters this weekend or next week, had a tough brain-draining week :(
Thank you for supporting my story and hope to be with you still until its end.
Disclaimer: This is not part of the story and only added to give update on how I am progressing with the story or reason of slow progress this week. Hoping for your understanding.
*Quick peak on the next chapter's start as I have not finished it yet*
Esha's POV
Three days.
I have not turned since then and I had been absent in school for two days. I did not talk to anyone much for these days. It had been so overwhelming. Everything I have known until now may have taken its toll in me. I wanted to feel okay again, completely okay.
*Too short? --- update you soon*