New Link: http://wbnv.in/a/f3fuiFF Onoda Ruki is just your ordinary high school student. He strived for being the Classmate A who's unimportant to the story. Despite being the Classmate A. Onoda has a secret desire which he always had ever since young and that was to steal each and every girl from their guy. Join him as he entered his high school days as he conquer and steal every girl he sets his eyes on. And along the way, the growth in his character and those around him. Current Schedule: 5 chapters/week https://discord.gg/BWBWUrU *I do not own the cover photo. I will take it out if requested. *If you want to support me, you can visit my Patreon. You can view some advanced chapters as thank you. https://www.patreon.com/dyrem *Or a donation is also appreciated. https://www.paypal.me/wndyrem *DISCLAIMER This is a work of fiction. All names, characters, places, and events are products of the author’s imagination or used in a fictitious way. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental. Moreover, the ages of the characters appearing in this fiction are 18 and above.
As the author. I'll shamelessly take this first review. Since the story is still in the initial phase, I can't say a lot. But like the title says, it will revolve around the MC stealing women. There are those who will be stolen easily. There will also be those who he need to do more be it blackmailing or anything he can come up with. His ultimate goal is to steal everything he sets his eyes on while staying as an obscure character. But along the way, he will also experience a character growth. It will not be immediately visible but we'll reach there. My native language isn't English so I know that there will be a lot of grammatical error. If you can point it out then please do so, I'll edit it. And lastly, I'm not a Japanese. I just felt that the setting of the story will fit Japanese High Schools. I don't dare claim I know everything about it so there might be a lot of inconsistencies but I'll try to keep it at that. Thanks for reading. I will shamelessly ask for your support too. Wish this MC of mine good luck at his conquest.
This story is a true gem on this site. It's a story about a guy that can't feel love and is only excited when he steals someone's girl, and for those that are on the fence, no, there is no NTR, nobody steals MC's girls, only he steals. But what I really like about this novel is the characters, they really feel alive, distinct and have realized personalities. It's something very rare on this site, where people can't even capture personalities when they write fan fiction, where the reader is already familiar with the characters. Their interactions are believable and I can recognize them just from their dialogue alone. The story also flows very well, aside from few grammatical errors where the author confuses she/he or something of that nature. It also feels that story has an objective, it has a planned out feel to it, not something that is written on the fly. I really like the girls in this novel. The author writes good romance and he makes me ship MC with almost every girl (except the teacher, for now...) even though I know that most of them are going to go nowhere :(. Overall a great novel that I see exploding in popularity in the future if the author keeps up this quality of writing.
I got nothing much to say. It's a great book, overall. If you want a well written and intricately constructed netori novel, this is for you. Each character has a distinct personality that you can really tell apart from each other through the dialogue. The character development is great, not perfect, but better than most novels in this site. Overall, it doesn't make you feel as scummy as you should even though the story is about stealing other people's women. It's because there is a reason why women fall in love with the MC, even though the MC doesn't like that. Even if you don't like netori, if you want a good romance or slice-of-life story where the MC takes the initiative, please give this story a try. I guarantee you, you will love it.
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Only the introduced girls. More will be added once they were introduced in the future chapters.
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Shimizu Akane - 1st year High School. Ruki's childhood friend who knew about his secret desire. And harbors deep feelings of love towards him.
Nogizaka Kana - 3rd year High School. She's dating a classmate and a fellow club mate Goto Kenji of the Literature Club.
Maemura Satsuki - 1st year High School Class 1. She is Ruki's classmate and desk neighbor. She appears to have some hidden feelings towards another neighbor Sakuma Ryou. A member of Basketball Club
Miyazaki Shiori - High School Teacher. The class advisor of Class 1-1. She's married and currently on her first year at teaching. Ruki caught her on her hobby.
Rindou Ayase - 1st year High School Class 1. She is Ruki's classmate and desk neighbor. An introvert who have trouble talking to people. She appears to have a crush on Ruki. A member of Book Club
Kanzaki Mio - 1st year High School Class 1. The Class President type. She was introduced as diligent and serious. Secretly dating someone.
Andou Nanami - 1st year High School Class 1. She was dubbed by Ruki as main heroine type of girl. There are rumors that she likes the protagonist type Ogawa.
Otsuka Karen - 2nd year High School. Member of Literature Club, the Curious type. She led 3 members of the club to quit because of excessive curiosity the previous year.
Ishida Rumi - 3rd year High School. President of Literature Club. She's the one who dragged Ruki to the club for trial.
Fujii Mirae - 1st year High School Class 4. Member of Literature Club. Bookworm type.
Fujimura Yaeko - 2nd year High School. One of the girls stolen by Ruki back in middle school. She fell in love with him and was cut off because of it.
Hayashi Makiko - the School Nurse.
Mori Hina - 1st year High School Class 1. Ogawa's childhood friend and Andou's best friend. She seems to have feelings for Ogawa.
Itou Maaya - 1st year High School Class 3. Rumoured to be dating someone. An Oujo-sama type according to Ruki's initial observation
Kojima Haruko - 2nd year High School. President of Book Club. One of the girls stolen by Ruki back in Middle School, she was previously a Student Council President.
Mina - Haruko's lover (not enough info yet)
Itou Himeko - 2nd year High School Class 3, Haruko's lover. A former introvert and one of the two girls introduced by Haruko to Ruki for him to satisfy his desire.
Kusunoki Ria - 3rd year Middle School. One of the girls stolen by Ruki back in Middle School. She is known to be an observant.
Imai Sena - 1st year High School. One of the girls stolen by Ruki back in Middle School. She's a known boxer who Ruki often trained with when he's still going to the Gym.
Ueno Aoi - 1st year High School. One of the girls stolen by Ruki back in Middle School. She said the opposite thing she wanted to say when Ruki cut her off.
Kaneko Otoha - 2nd year High School. One of the girls stolen by Ruki back in Middle School. She's known to have trouble talking to people. A real noblewoman, she's known to have been an expert in Kendo. Whenever she holds her shinai she will be a different person.
Nikaido Eimi - 1st year High School. Ruki's classmate and desk neighbour back in Middle School. She confessed that she liked him even though there was lack of communication between them.
Harada Chizuru - 1st year High School Class 1-1. A Gyaru and part of the delinquent group. She claimed to be dating the known delinquent of the class, Fukuda. She found Ruki interesting when they crossed paths in a train.
Hoshino Miwa - A distant relative of Ruki's Mom who used to live with them before his desire manifested. She's only a year younger than his Mom and she left the house after she married someone. She showed up again with her son 5 years later.
Mihara Hitomi - Otoha's chaffeur/bodyguard. She's already serving Otoha since young, a cold beauty whose age range between Shio and Miwa. She seems to have some interest towards anything sexual but never act upon it.
Akiyama Nao - 3rd year High School, Ruki's stolen girl during his 1st year in Middle School, he mostly spent his time with her during it but when she graduated, Ruki lost contact with her due to him not responding to any of her mails. Ruki met her again when she visited Shio's house and found out that she's the girl, Shio's husband is seeing.
Imada Saki - 1st year High School Class 1, a member of the main protagonist group and the Student Support Club.
Yanagi Izumi - 2nd year High School, a member of the main protagonist group and the Student Support Club. She's a delinquent and one of the girls chasing after Ogawa.
Kotobuki Arisa - 2nd year High School, a member of the main protagonist group and the Student Support Club. Izumi's bestfriend, a playful girl who loves teasing her juniors. She's also known as someone who never had any breaks on what she says.