Christian is an orphan raised from birth by the Paladin Order. He trains hard to become someone worthy of wearing the title "Paladin Knight". He becomes exceptionally strong and quickly rises through the ranks of the Order. But after slaying countless demons, beastmen, and others, he becomes emotionally numb to cope with the countless lives he's taken. This is until he saves a beast girl from the sword of his comrade. He's then forced to choose between her life and his place in the Order. (I do not own any artwork used in this book, all credit goes to it's respected artist)
This is one captivating book. It was able to grab my attention right from the start, and the plot is very interesting. The world background is described thoroughly giving me an easier time to imagine all the scenarios taking place. All in all, I give this book a five out of five!!! Keep up the good work author!
Writing quality, check! Stability of updates, check!! Character design, check!!! Story development, check!!!! World background, check....!!!!!! You get a solid 5 starts from me. Your synopsis is good. Your writing quality is on point.. No grammatical error. Your book flowed well, nice plot line. Love how you described in the book. Particularly like Sir Richard, the details are good. Now the is I have, some of your paragraphs are long, try shortening it.. And some chapters are really long... For me, it made me lose hope... Make the chapters not so very long pls. Oh and the novel is a nice change... Paladin order... Has knights and different from ur normal cultivation story a bit.. Nice twists author. Keep it up.
With just a few chapters, the author has already made himself a vivid world and engaging characters. It's amazing that with each chapter, you're already longing for the next ones. Personally, first person narratives are something I often do not read... this time however, I was entranced with Chriatian's point of view. It was easy to emphatize with him and enjoy his quips and quirks. He pulled the reader eagerly along through histories of the world and the magic system itself. Sir Richard is quite amazing as well! You know it can get boring learning of history, but the author has made it possible to absorb the information with ease along with the magic system. And man, that magic system is impressive and can almost be grounded with sense and science!
Timeline
(BC-Before Crusade, AC- After Crusade)
500BC-The First Kingdom was established
I
0-The First Demon Crusade
I
2 AC Demon army repelled
I
10 AC The Second Demon Invasion
I
100 AC The Demon army repelled again
I
342 AC Paladin Order Invasion
I
463 AC Sir Magnus's Disappearance
I
483 AC Christian was born
I
486 AC Paladin Order Repelled
I
490 AC Third Demon Invasion
I
500 AC (Present Day)
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Christian/Sir Richards song
Capo 4
[Strum pattern ↧↓↑-↧↓↑-rest of song]
[Intro]
Emx2
[Verse 1]
Em
Beauty I've heard
G Em
Yes, the beauty I've seen
Em D
Bestowed only by nature's queen
Em
Roads have been hard
G Em
Yes they have been long
Em G Em
The ones I've been traveling on.
[Interlude]
Em↓ ↓↓↑G↓D↓Em↓ x2
Em↓ ↓↓↑G↓D↓C↓
Emx2
[Chorus]
Em
god as my witness
G Em
god as my might
Em G D Em
Evil ones I will smite
Em
Listen oh dear ones
G Em
Listen to me.
Em C D Em
Heaven's gates we will see
[Verse 2]
Em
If I die brother
G Em
Don't you cry
Em G D Em
We'll meet on the other side
Em G D Em
I'll meet you on the other side
Em D G Em
Em↓ ↓↓↑G↓D↓Em↓
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First Crusade song
Capo 6
[Strum pattern ↧↓↑-↧↓↑-rest of song]
[Intro]
Emx2
[Verse 1]
Em G Em
They took all our land
Em G Em
They took my leg and hand
G C Am
Yet today we still do fight
Em G Am
Holding on with all our might
G C Am
god have you forsaken us?
Em G Am
When in you lies all our trust
[Interlude]
Em↓G↓C↓C↑Am↓D↓Em↓
Em↑Am↓D↓
[Verse 2]
Em G Am
This seed we do sow
G C Am
Is for our child to know
Em G Am
It is for them we fight
G C Am
So tonight give your lives
Emx2