I like the concept and the plotting to revenge type stories.
I've only read the first chapter so far and am waiting a lot more to read it all at once but I can see the actual plot from just that. False incarceration to plot revenge is original enough for me 👌
The writing also doesn't follow the conventional writing standards but that's what gives it a bit more charm.
jordiMaverick_bW
Status: c104yr
HERO X HIDE best ship. I love toxicity.
I enjoyed the writing on this novel, the main character is so cucked I am rooting for him. He is not some peerless badass who suddenly gets blessed with plot armor and crushes all.
The world around him compliments and justifies his actions.
Abilities, I think they count as part of the world so I want to find out more about them especially the main characters'. If this were printed I would be nursing paper cuts because this is one hell of a page-turner. Good work and better luck to you. FIGHT ON!
Hesreth
Status: c14yr
Yuu begged for it. Yuu got it.
Here's your revyuu.
Dang, the writing is unconventional but flows super nicely. I'm all for this angsty revenge false incarceration story. I'm not going to read it through right now but defo adding it to my library!