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Love the story! The romance was clearly depicted in their action and I love how you build up each characters. This would’ve been great if you break it down in chapters. It would sort your short story more neatly because in chapter 1, it could already be seen that the flashback was kind of confusing and especially so when u cramped it in one chapter. Anyway, nice writing!

Keep u the good work author! 😁

P. S. Do kindly review mine as well