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Mix Emotions. It has a sad beginning with so much secrecy. Every characters have their own struggles and pains which really made me curious of what happened to them in the past. As I went further, the story focused on friendship and how the characters valued it. With this, I finally understand why were they so tormented and tortured at the beginning of the story. This is really a heartfelt story and readers can learn a lot of lessons. Superb, Author.

Quite the endeavour, this one. Would recommend for those that want a breath of fresh air amid rampant isekai and cultivation works.

Grammar started out just a bit rough, before drastically improving throughout the later chapters. Now that's improvement. Dialogue and prose also goes through the same progression, getting better the longer you read. I'd suggest getting the old stuff up to speed with the new stuff, a remaster of sorts to provide consistency and show from the get go just how far you've improved. 

Keep on writing 👍

Amazing story. Quite a thriller actually. Starts out nice and easy but you soon realise that all characters have heavy baggages, the mystery of their past and their new presents make for a gripping story. Awesome.