SHARDS

BitterSweetPam

Fantasy

Synopsis

The world without magic. The truth being forgotten. The lives worth risking. Likha didnt know what she is in for when her grandfather passed down a shard before he died. Ever since then, she started to receive dreams, visions, and warnings of different kind that could endanger her life and others. Now she must find the truth behind the shard...or is the truth is really what it seems?

Top Reviews

BlindBandit

Status: c14 3yr

Are you perhaps a filipino?, cause i saw some very familiar wordings there xD, its a very interesting story though... and did you get good grades in the finals? haha anyhow it's a good read... very much liked it :)

Lazy_leon

Status: c4 4yr

Character design excellent
Grammar good
World background Hmmmm..... You need to at least read first 5 chapter to understand...

I will advise author to split extra huge sentences in the first chapter.

But it's also play since everyone have different style of writing.

Good luck keep up the good work!,🙏

ThePotatoKing

Status: c1 4yr

Nice story. Love the flow and the character introductions. Nice story, minimal errors and good quality. Best of luck with the story!
Though the first chapter was really small it helped in delivering a greater impact. The story really picks up in the next chapters.

Chapter 1: The Ending

"Finally"

The hero laid on the ground as the bittersweet raindrops landed gracefully on his face. It is as if the world slowed down for him to enjoy his last moment.

How ironic that at death, he finally learned this kind of peace. Echoes of grief and rage reign in the background of the evil king as he watched the Great Crystal tearing apart.

From the corner of his eyes, he saw the corpses of the ones he called "friends". They too have lost their lives in this fight. Lost their lives for the world to keep living. A tear rolled down from his eyes yet it wasn't sadness nor pain...

It is just pure joy. With his last breath, he uttered a word that no one can hear but only to himself