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luciel_707
First of all the story is great but i noticed that, there's more improvement to the book it .Like:
-adding the right punctuation in sentences. Like dot in the end of your sentences. It is important even in silent or oral reading a book.
-> ex for the character who are expressing what they gonna say : "Ako nga pala si ____ ."
-The end paragraph punctuation in character's pov. (I noticed some of the punctuation here is not present).
-check your final draft before publishing.
-> I noticed your spelling in chapter 1 instead of 'medyo' it become 'meyo'.
That's all^^. But don't stop writing! Improve more and more and you'll be succeed one day.
Chapter 1: FATE
I really admire Pluem and Chimon and medyo nabitin ako sa mga BL na ginawa nila and I really want to see them do more of BL series. Don't you think? Share your thoughts comment na!
CAST:
Pluem Purim Rattanaruangwattana as Angelo Gabriel De Los Reyes
Chimon Wachirawit Ruangwiwat as Mark Alexander Santos
DISCLAIMER:
This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events, locales, and incidents are either the products of the author's imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.