Synopsis
Sundan ang not so special and hindi ineexpect na pagkakaroon ko ng love life? Matutupad ba ang gusto kong destiny? Masyadong maraming tanong wag natin gawing komplikado. Let's start the way of our DESTINY...
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luciel_707
luciel_707
First of all the story is great but i noticed that, there's more improvement to the book it .Like:
-adding the right punctuation in sentences. Like dot in the end of your sentences. It is important even in silent or oral reading a book.
-> ex for the character who are expressing what they gonna say : "Ako nga pala si ____ ."
-The end paragraph punctuation in character's pov. (I noticed some of the punctuation here is not present).
-check your final draft before publishing.
-> I noticed your spelling in chapter 1 instead of 'medyo' it become 'meyo'.
That's all^^. But don't stop writing! Improve more and more and you'll be succeed one day.