Webnovel

giving you 5 stars cause you deserve it!

It may not be perfect but it has elements and taste. Characters are alive and the world has colors. Its an unpolished gem that just needs a few retouch and bwala!

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Also, this is a review swap. dont forget to add my novel too! xD Blood Type: Dragon

So far, it's really good. You have put quite some merits on the story development, character design.

Writing quality and updates have some problems. 

There are some mistakes in grammar. I think you will able be to overcome those mistakes. 

Honestly, you have done a good job so far. Keep it up.

The design of your characters and world background is enough and quiet detail. I enjoy the first few chapters.

It's just i can't really give a really fair review because five chapters seems not enough for me to do so.

And please, write the synopsis of your novel. It'll attract readers and evoke their curiosity.