Hi :-)... This is my first novel ever and I am excited, happy and a little bit nervous... If you are reading it then I am really thankful to you for giving your precious time to this story... I really hope you like it and please share your thoughts through the comments and review the story and I know that my story is not at all great but I am trying.... Constructive reviews and comments will really help me a lot to become better.. Please review this story seriously and help me. Since I am also a human and I also have feelings and I believe that WORDS CAN MAKE YOU , WORDS CAN BREAK YOU. ENGLISH is NOT MY FIRST LANGUAGE so there will be grammatical mistakes. THIS STORY IS TOTALLY MY IMAGINATION AND HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH ANYONE IN REAL LIFE. IF YOU FIND IT SIMILAR TO ANYONE THEN IT IS PURELY A COINCIDENCE. PLAGIARISM IS WRONG.... NEITHER I DO NOR I WANT OTHERS TO DO SYNOPSIS Elsa Rose Lewis , a talented, hard working and innocent 22 year old girl does her work with full sincerity and confidence. She just wanted a good job , find the love of her life and have a Happy family with her mother, brother, husband and kids but..... But... But.. But.. My darling... Destiny has it's own plans and life not always goes as we wish.... A day in her life came when she met him and things started changing for Elsa. Elijah Wilson, a 32 year old, talented, intelligent, smart, most successful and.... Cunning cold hearted Devil of the Country A business world, who is known to be a ruthless King in business world. He is also one of the most eligible bachelors and young ladies swoon on his charming charisma and always dream of being his wife.... But... As we know my sweetheart... Destiny has its own plan ;) What will happen when Miss Beautiful innocent cutie pie will meet Mr. Handsome King devil.. ;-) A/N: For any other questions you may ask me through comment section. If you like it then please give some of your power stones and add in your library... :-)
Hi friends 😊 Shamelessly rating myself 😜... So let me tell you few things about the story... So the story in the beginning isn't going to be very fast forward when it comes to romance between the ML and FL because I want to first create the proper scenario.... So the Romance between the ML and FL won't be much in the beginning...I want to create proper way in which they will fall in love with each other since my story won't be a "love at first sight " types... But as the story will progress their romance will also start... 😊 And Thanks for giving my novel a chance...
I like the character development in the beginning. it really helps the reader make a connection with the main character. I am looking forward to how the relationship between Elsa and Mr. Whatever develops. The writing quality is good. it easy to read and has a nice pace.Cant wait for the next chapter
A bit too early to see how the story will develop, but so far, it is quite nice. I am waiting to see how the story develops further down the road, and will leave another review later. So far, the meeting of the ML and FL is slightly cliche, but that's what we readers live off, right? xD I am waiting to see how further interactions go, but the writing style thus far is smooth, though there are a few grammatical errors. Particularly, I like the way you used the flashback earlier in Chapter 1. Hoping to see more soon! Keep up the good work, author! :)