Stuck in a Novel: A Game of Love and Fate

lelelei

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Synopsis

Ysara Leonor’s life could be perfectly described by the words similar to ordinary, normal, and simple. But that life of hers turned upside down when she finds herself stuck in the famous novel of Laro ng Tadhana (A Game of Destiny), a book written by her very own grandmother, Preciosa Valentino.

And the only way to escape is to finish the story of the novel. But there’s a catch: she has to make the villainess of the story the one who gets the happily ever after.

Top Reviews

Chryiss

Status: c6 6yr

Updates and World: 5
Writing: 4
Story and Character: 3

After a great first chapter, the next were lacking; even though it wouldn’t solve this problem completely, I think combining the two into one would help. Individually, they did very little to move the plot forward. They also seemed much shorter in length. In general, the lead up to the being transported to grandma’s world was lackluster, but the actual arrival in the world qas better. Even though the maid, mom, and doctor acted exactly as I had expected, their reactions were still funny.

MC acted a little too stereotypically with the whole kidnapping isn’t good and of course I don’t have amnesia! It would’ve been better if her reaction was a little more unique. I’m also surprised that she wasn’t surprised that her grandma was talking to her through the diary? It’s also a bit early in the story to see how her character is fleshed out too.

In general, again this is very early in the story, so I’m just predicting and presuming, the story lacks complete originality—the sources of originality it does have is the premise of being stuck in a story from what was told in the first chapter. Additionally, the 365 numbers made me curious.

This has good potential, but the middle execution after the first chapter was lacking to the degree of excitement and expectation. I hope for future chapters that you focus on really fleshing out her personality as well as bring more of the stuck in a stort as well as other novel ideas. As long as those two are accomplished, this will turn into something very engaging and original.

angel1331

Status: c6 6yr

Saw this story line and started reading this novel up to now the story hasnt progressed so far yet..it piqued my interest looking forward for further updates

Yuinavarro

Status: c3 6yr

Is that Yoon Eun Hye on your cover? 😁 I like the storyline. But I'm just a little nervous for the MC especially since she's going to be stuck inside the novel?

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