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After learning about his father past, Maddoxx decided to follow its steps and train to become a mercenary. A old friend of his father send him to a place where he will learn everything he needs to surpass his dad With the help of his crazy and weird friends he met in the training, he creates a Mercenary Group. Other than just doing its mission, Madd and his crew mess around a lot and create a lot of enemies all along the way.
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Copy_Paste_Ninja
This story will be based on the life of Maddoxx, a technically normal guy, who discovers his origins and his father past. Trying to follow his steps, while protecting friends and important people to him. Most of the time we will have mercenary missions, crazy action and even more crazy people. But if we just put characters like that they will be empty. So we will have some romance between every mercenary and his dear-half. After all guy deserves a good girl to welcome him after a tough mission. Drama is a good thing for the plot and character background. Everyone have their own **** to hide or to regret. I am not that kind of guy who forgives everything. I'm not the guy that gives a plot armor to the main character and make them immortal or some ****. Everyone dies after taking a good shot. Everyone can be killed while sleeping. This is a 'real' novel, it happens in our own world with some real facts, sometimes with real data, and i will try my best to make everything plausible. But keeping the fun of the read. What i am trying to say is that this is not a transmigration/reincarnation/System ****, this is a novel where our mc can die anytime, he is not invincible, he is not OP, and he is not dumb. Our mc likes pus***, he likes girls, he likes money, he like guns, he like his friends. I have some goddamn missions in mind, i have some incredible ideas for the plot. If you guys give me a chance, I will show all of them to you. Sorry for making it long. Enjoy.
DrunkenDriver
I loved the story, all the character so far are well builded and even thought we are talking a military and war novel, we can see that the author knows that we need some drama, romance, comedy and relaxed times while reading a novel. The author so far sounds that he knows exactly what he wants about this novel, and this can change the quality of the novel by tenfold. Thank you for the good work
EliteNormalGuy
Grammar is a little :( but in overall measures, you are doing good. The novel hooked me and I don't plan to leave it soon. Loved madd and Jessica relation and how they met. Also loves the way you search for real-life data to insert in your novel, this gives a good realistic taste and its very good. You can get better with the time, and i am looking after it
Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A great surprise
Somewhere in England
*Beep*
The cellphone alarm rang.
*Beep*
*Beep*
"Hmm.. fuck off". Said Maddoxx throwing a shoe at the cellphone.
*Beeeeeeeeeeeeeep*
" Ahhhhh, this noise is making me crazy." Said Maddoxx while reaching the cellphone from the bed.
He unlocked the phone and turned the alarm off, when a message popped up.
- Transaction complete.
Your account balance is Eight hundred ninety million dollars -
"...."
"...Hehe" thought Madd while making a smug face.
Maddoxx was a tall, black-haired man. He never worked out but he had a few muscles because he followed a healthy diet and did some everyday chores. His eyes were green and he was very charming.
He lived alone since both of his parents died. His dad died in an airplane accident when he was twelve, and his mother died recently after losing a battle against cancer.
The house which he lives was a two-story house, the place was a nice and cozy. The house was often empty because only Madd lived there, but when he was there, he only stayed in a few rooms. The place he liked the most was the living room. With a fireplace adjacent to the wall and two big chairs, the room often brings flashbacks from his childhood and parents.
He wasn't rich, yet he didn't lack money. Since when he was a kid, both Madd and his parents owned a bakery in downtown London, the place was called 'Noble Heart'. The bakery employees were working there since the opening, and they were responsible for running the place since Madd mother became sick. Madd was just the owner of the place, all the profit was monthly given to him, and the bills and expenses were paid by automatic debit.
Sometimes Madd went there just to talk with the employees or even the customers, but he didn't need to work or had any commitment during his day.
After having breakfast, Madd called a taxi and started his short trip to the bank.
He had an account in the Golden Bank, the biggest bank in all UK.
After a few minutes, the taxi arrived at his destination: the main square. After paying the taxi and crossing the street, Madd went to the tallest building in the square which was his bank.
His account was originally owned by his father, and then passed on to him. For this reason he was well known by the bank employees. At the entrance, both guards make a small tip with their caps.
It was almost midday so the queue was very long. Passed just a few minutes before his name was called to the counter.
"Good morning and welcome to Golden Bank Sir. I'm Jessica at your disposal."
Said the attendant. She was a tall redhead woman, her long hair was loose and she was wearing a black short skirt and a white blouse, perfectly combined with high heels. She was worthy of the title 'Gentlewoman'
"Jessica, its always a pleasure to see you." Said Madd while smiling widely
"You are beautiful. Even though my last memory of seeing you was different. At the time we were both naked."
Jessica blushed and even lost her breath. After a few silent and awkward moments, she snapped out from her thoughts and said in a low voice. "Please Madd, not here. I'm working. Don't embarrass me in public."
At this moment Madd looked around and realized that all the attendants were looking at her and whispering. "I... I'm sorry Jessica... I didn't want to....It's just that you really mean a lot to me. "
Maddoxx was even more embarrassed than Jessica. Trying to solve the problem he started to mutter to himself incomprehensible words.
"It's fine Madd. Just forget about it. What brings you here?" Jessica said with a little smile
"Can you check my account balance please? I think its something wrong. "
"Sure, give me a momen...." Jessica froze while looking at the computer screen.
"Jessica?" Madd said with a worried voice
"Jessica are you okay?
" Pl.... please.... follow me... to the VIP room...Sir" Said Jessica with a trembling and robotic voice.