This one is different from what I have read earlier so I was not sure in the beginning if it will be good or not but after reading a few chapters .. I have fallen in love with it I already love leads who are intelligent and strong 💜 And it has them It has actions scenes which I like very much 😍 The mystery and spying is really the most interesting thing about this book It is worth a try 😍🥰💜💜💜💜💜💜
Hi! I've read the first four chapters of your book and it was good to read and does not stain my eyes. The first chaps are good and I can see where this story is going, the goal to the book itself. You have minimal spelling and grammatical errors. First chappy the ' definitely '. Anyways, these errors can be easily corrected by editing.( Anyways, I don't even edit mine lol ) The Character details can be improved by including the character's' physical appearance and quirks. I will give another thorough review after reading 20-30+ chapters. This book already has 100+ chaps and I'm confused why are you not contracted, it can boost your colls tho. Anyways, Happy Writing Author!
CHARACTERS
Male Leads
Mike Angelo — Secret agent in the WOSDA Agency. A strict kind of person in both fields as a student and as an agent. He definetely do not like girls at all (in present time) He is a great Shooter (gun shooting).
Sam Alexander — He also is a secret agent in the WOSDA agency. Not only an agent but also an inventor. He is a great student and has a soft personality and a TOPPER in the college
Austin Texas — Agent in the WOSDA agency, he is a playboy (well he is a way better playboy compared to those you would have seen in TV serials, novels, comics, etc.) He is a better person since he is an agent.
Mr. Harry — The Head / Heir /owner Of the WOSDA Agency (World Organisation of Secret Defense Agency) The Principal of The Four Leaf College (The above characters are in the same college)
A little bit of a history of Male Leads
Sam, Mike & Austin have been best friends since kindergarten. The Three of them were chosen in the WOSDA Agency by Mr. Harry when they were in high school and since then they are defending the world from the darkness of the underworld, rapists, illegal drug dealers, etc They work as one group in the agency and handle different kind of missions across the world.
Female Leads
Alena Wilson — An ordinary girl but has a dark past with her. She do not like boys at all. A total rule bender
Ally Dawson — She is a great person. She is just the opposite of Alena, she is a total rule-following person
Sabrina Johnson — She is interested in inventory and is a great student
Creator's word — This is just a clarification of who the characters are and what are they like. I have written these character's details to make the story easy to understand for readers. If there are any suggestions please do not hesitate. I will work hard to fulfill your wishes. Thank you !!
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