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"Little Lass ah, look at master, don't master face look so handsome?" "Xinghui ah, become my disciple." "Little ball, let me cook for you!" Xinghui stared at the three adult people in front of her, and her eyes drifted to the sky. What sin she did in the past to meet these weird people, ah?! - dropped series -
Top Reviews
MrJaxPL
I am not the best person to review romance fiction. The quality is ok but I recommend using Grammarly or some online corrector to make it better. The story is at the beginning of development. I don't know but I took it for something lighthearted and not serious hahaha. I will come back after some time and update the review if needed. Good luck!
minyol
This story has promise. I am captivated by the ease at which the world is painted out to be. The english is understandable, but I wish the grammar could be reviewed. I advise using ******r words. The emotions of the character comes across so easily, it almost made me cry. Added to my collection. Keep it up!
GabrielDetchans
An interesting story with a lot of potential! Romance and comedy its the mix of genres that I like the most. If you share my tastes then I recommend you to try this story! The writing quality its reasonable in a beginner and the stability of updates is spectacular. World background seems solid, there is a lot of secondary characters and they are getting developed nicely. However, the main character strike me as too pasive and could use a little bit of tweaking. Hopefully as the story moves forward she is going to evolve and become more lively. Overall a really good story that I am gonna add to my collection!
Chapter 1: 00
A tiny light floating in the vast nothingness. Drifted into countless fogs and lands, for unknown millenia, the tiny light slowly became bigger, later a body formed. However, it still shapeless. As if drowned into eternal sleep, the body let itself washed by the flow of merciless time.
Specks of consciousness morphed, developing a feminine figure from the light, shapeless body.
The subtle light dispersed, revealing the skin of mortal female. Pale snow hair threading her body, as if covering the nakedness of her clothless skin. Her lashes trembled and slowly the girl opened her eyes. Blank watery eyes, frighteningly emotionless and cold staring above.
Her lips slightly opened, yet no noise came out. After numerous failed attempt to formulate her mind, the girl gave up.
For a long time, the girl just lay down with no movement.
One day, in the middle of her deep sleep the girl heard someone calling her. However, no matter the girl tried to listen, the voice too distant and blurry. And the last time she knew, the pure white nothingness of her dream changed into darkness.