Synopsis
I'm re-writing the story with much better plot. I'm sorry for the reader who want to read this novel now. I realised that I need to improve my writing quality first before publishing it. Thank you for your understanding.
Top reviews
ammarazia
ammarazia
Such a unique story..u guys should read it..a lot of unpredictable things happen..not sure u guys can guess or not..but a lot of sweet things too
lets_get_this_rice
lets_get_this_rice
(No spoilers)
So hear me out..
The story has a past/present perspective which is something I am not very familiar with.
But even though it may be confusing in some areas, I really enjoyed reading it.
My third romance novel, so I be considered an expert in this field. BUT AUTHOR! We need to spice it up! Its...its to superficial :(
I really liked the twists made between mc and the lover, and there are some parts which just had me laughing like some idiots, the problem lies in the weak romantic aspects!
Grammar is good, and I see you kept improving along the way(which is a huge plus in my book) however, there is something I always share with other authors. And that is to always strive to improve your vocabulary! It really increases the diversity of the story, and would help you with cac description and development.
Character design is on.the high end in my list, but vocab is a must! :)
Stability of updates are hella good. So I'll give you some extra starts there.
Overal, I would give you a 4.5/5
But yeah, here's a 5/5 for helping bring some diversity to my library😂 keep it up!
Gelou77
Gelou77
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