CHASED

rheann

General

Synopsis

A short story that happened years ago which make her realized that life ain't no rainbows and cupcakes. life is as hard as it can be which leads to her sudden missing to find who, what and where she can find her true self.

Top Reviews

NotUse

Status: c7 4yr

The plot is astounding, and the characters are lovable. There are some words that require capitalization, just like the dialogues but it's fine with me. Nice work👍👍👍

Chainslock

Status: c7 4yr

So far, so good. 

The concept is intriguing and the plot speaks for itself, too. Grammar could use some fixing. Proofread and edit will do, I think. Character design is good as well.

All in all, a promising start. Good job.

Chapter 1: 1

"Who are you? How dare you?You prostitute you have no right to throw yourself to me, Thus you are not my level and you should leave before I investigate and ruin everything you have, If you have anything" and a wild laugh could be heard in the whole room

Her tears started to fall as she ran towards the door, While wearing a thin piece of cloth. She would never thought that the person who got her first... is a unknown person.

As she ran outside of the hotel she felt a

droplet of water touch her face is this my tears? she look up and then she muttered to herself

"Seems like the sky is also gloomy as I am."

She dialed her mom's phone number. before her mother could talk she told her

"Mom I am sorry for what i'm about to do. Don't worry i'm fine, you guys should be careful. Also mom please remember that I love you both always. Don't look for me just stay safe. I love you both"

As she ended the phone call.

Huge tear drops slide through her face which

became invisble due to rain drops.

As she finished her decision she ran to the road near her and a screching sound could be heard , firm light came to her and

Everything went black.