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When one God tries to fight back, his goal actually dooms his planet to war and destruction. Now the inhabitants can only survive and learn to use mana. If one cultivates and survives long enough they might be able to take back the planet. If they survive longer maybe the solar system. If they can become a god maybe the whole universe. ---------------------------- “To live is to suffer, to survive is to find some meaning in the suffering.” ― Friedrich Nietzsche This quote is what inspired me to write a cultivation novel not about being the strongest or most talented. It's about the sacrifice people around you make, and the hardships people live through. ---------------------------- I can't keep a schedule anymore. I will release a chapter once I am finished. Thank you everyone for checking out my novel. It means a lot.
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Hyowha
What I like about the story is how it’s different from the others. Instead of a typically asian setting, we have english names and greek gods. There are myths from the real world, mixed with some fantasy, which is quite interesting. Another thing that I like about it is that the grammar is very good. There’s are no sentences, where the meaning is not understood. The characters personally are not my cup of tea, but I will not dive further on this topic, as that is my personal opinion an der should not define whether the novel is good or not I think that this is story is definitely one to check out, if you are interested in something different and something that’s takes you to a journey.
quattiner
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HavenlyJeep
Writing Quality: (3/5) - The very second chapter throws me off. You DO NOT put an action like *sniff* WITHIN a dialogue. Put it after or before to indicate that Leo is doing that. Otherwise, an okay grammar and I don't have to read sentences twice to understand it. Story: (4/5) - Cultivation. Enough said. Character: (3/5) - Need more description on the characters for the readers to imagine how they look. Please, author, give each character's enough description when first introducing them. World: (4/5) - A world where its all survival to the fittest. Oh I forgot to mention the MC has a system, so there's that. Need more background descriptions.
Chapter 1: Cultivation lvl 1-7
Cultivation Levels in Earth's Universe
Level 0 Mortal Mortality 0-100 years
Level 1 Tempered Body (5 stages) Mortality 100-200 years
Tempered Flesh (Stage 1 -Absorbs mana into flesh and increase defense)
Tempered Muscle (Stage 2 -Absorbs mana into muscles and increase strength)
Tempered Viscera (Stage 3 –Absorb mana into nerves and increase dexterity)
Tempered Bone (Stage 4 –Absorb mana into bones and increase vitality)
Tempered Vascular (Stage 5 –Absorb mana into organs and bloodstream. This allows mana to circulate in the body)
Level 2 Mana Fighter (4 stages) Mortality 200-400 years
Early (Stage 1), Middle (Stage 2), Late (Stage 3), Peak (Stage 4)
This is when the body can breathe mana, and you slowly store mana in Dantian gland in the center of your chest.
Level 3 Core Building (4 stages) Mortality 500-800 years
Early (Stage 1), Middle (Stage 2), Late (Stage 3), Peak (Stage 4)
This is when the body has stored mana to the max in the Dantian, and it has turned it into a mana organ pumping mana throughout the body.
Level 4 Shattering Stage (3 stages) Mortality 800-1000 years
1st Shattering (State 1 – You crack your Dantian)
2nd Shattering (State 2 – You create several cracks all over the Dantian)
3rd Shattering (Stage 3 – Completely destroy your Dantian)
Level 5 Avatar Establishment (4 stages) Mortality 1000-1500 years
Early (Stage 1), Middle (Stage 2), Late (Stage 3), Peak (Stage 4)
This is when the condensed mana from your destroyed Dantian is shaped into an avatar of your choosing. Avatars usually formed based on the laws of mana the person studies.
Level 6 Construct Evolution (4 stages) Mortality 2000-3000 years
Early (Stage 1), Middle (Stage 2), Late (Stage 3), Peak (Stage 4)
This is when the avatar evolves to a new form based on Someone's level of understanding the laws.
Level 7 Severing (3 stages) Mortality 2000-3000 years
1st Serving (State 1 – Tribulation of the mind)
2nd Serving (State 2 – Tribulation of the soul)
Last Severing (Stage 3 – Tribulation of the body)
Ascension to the Immortal Universe