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This book could've been published in physical copies, and the author would have a great success!

Writing Quality: (5/5)
- Very descriptive. However, because of that, a chapter sometimes  does not progress the plot much, and the readers might be put away by such long paragraphs of description without nothing much happening.

Updates: (5/5)
- No complains there.

Story Development: (4/5)
- As I said, each chapters do not make up a lot in terms of the story actually moving forward. At this pace, the readers might put the book away in the first initial chapters. It's good, but the author needs to cut down in over-explaining stuff.

Character Design: (5/5)
- No complains there. Love Hannah and the way the author titled each chapters. Very interesting approach.

World: (4/5)
- I would've put this in 5 out of 5, what with the grandiose way explaining the surroundings and stuff. But, the narration and explanation take up most of the chapters. There's also not much dialogue, as the readers need to connect with the characters in the early chapters. But, this is the author's writing style, so I won't discourage him for it. 

; Overall, this needs to be published in the physcical book market just from the way the author chose his words.

nice narration from a 3rd person view. 
minor here and there but doesn't stop story immersion.
8 chapters for a start is nice.
wish there are more chapters to be read. keep up the good work. I wonder how the plot would grow.

Hello everyone and hello author!

This is my first novel in the Philippines, I do not know if the author is Filipino, but if he is then it will be my first Filipino novel!

The story is very good! If you are not just a novel reader, in this case just a novel reader, but also reads crime novels, watch crime series, watch police anime and mysteries ... Or even manga with a dark and supernatural humor ... This is the best novel of its kind!

So far, until the chapters published at this time, I'm in love with this story!

The narration reminds me of the British and noir novels, which I love very much! And there's an inevitable suspense in each chapter!

The narration is also synchronized with each character who stars the chapter!

If the author continues so he goes far!

Congratulations!