I am the amateu r-istic writer of this book, looking forward for your guidance :) Reading this book, you could see how much I need your assitance xD
Chapters would updated from time-to-time if I can...
6yr
Chained_Soul
Chained_Soul
The writing is actually good. The only problem is that there is not enough chapters. …………………………………………………………
It has also lot of potential, i suggest introduction of how they use magic like thing power or a exciting battle in the later chapter will also do
6yr
M_Lexi
M_Lexi
It has a very interesting premise that has been introduced, the world building and writing is quite good almost classical. But without more chapters I don't really know where the story will go or what the characters intend to do. So more updates and chapters please. x