I don't have to do my normal notation due to there only being 5 chapters.;,;. Constructive Criticism: I pointed out some errors I found while reading, also I see that it's been a full month since you last updated this book. I hope you plan to finish this at some point because dropping a book is something that's frowned upon and will sometimes turn readers away from reading other stories you wish to create. Positive Feedback: Good plot, character development, and world background... You found a way to turn re-incarnation into a time travel to a parallel dimension or something of that nature, nice.;,;. Keep up the good work.;,;. Personal Feedback: this will remain in my Library for another 5 months if I get no further updates to when you plan to continue this book, if I do get specifics, then I will keep it until either it's updated, your date passes, or the 5 months pass, if it's updated, I will follow it, otherwise, whichever comes second of the other two, will cause me to drop it.;,;. Hope I don't end up dropping this due to me feeling like it was Dropped by the author.;,;.
I can't continue writing this novel. It's not writer's block or personal stuff. I simply can't write it anymore. I liked the idea but I can't execute it. Furthermore, there're many other novels like this right now of which I can't win against.
That's not exactly the problem. I didn't write this because I wanted to win something. I did it because I like to write, so the fact of dropping a novel hurts me more.
I will continue it, but I can't set in stone a date when I will. I'll finish it, as I don't like to let things in the middle.
For that reason, I will understand if you erase this from your libraries. I will still write other things, though, but I don't know if I will publish until I have confidence in them.
Sincerely,
Hangatyr.